Monday, April 26, 2010

CREATIVE WRITING

I'M PROPOSING YOU A GAME. I START A STORY AND WITH YOUR COMMENTS YOU CONTINUE IT. DO YOU WANT TO JOIN? LET'S SEE WHERE WE GET TO.

When I woke up that morning I had this stange feeling that something that could change my life forever was about to happen ...

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  2. then, I stand up and I start to do my breakfast, but not the normal one, one special, whit big portions, because today I'll need a lot of energy

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  3. Then,I left home and closed the door but I forgot my keys inside...and i thought : "today wont be a nice day "

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  4. ...my phyton don´t have food !!!!

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  5. Then, I heard a noise on the first floor..I realize the windows are openned..I'm sheevering

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  6. "The first floor is too high. I believe you can´t get through the window,Max ",said my beautiful neighbour.
    My name is Max and I´m eighteen.

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  7. My neighbour suggests that I went with her to her house, and from there I came in my home, but I didn't trust her..

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  8. I didn't trust her, but this was my only option to get the keys, so I decided to went with Jessica

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  10. We walked along the dark Princess Street for half an hour before getting her home...During our walk we had a very interesting conversation that made me think...

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  11. Jessica Doesn´t have parents. They died in a plane´s accident when she was ten years old.Since then she lives with her unbearable alcoholic grandmather. Now, she is in twenty and she works as cleaner in the high school where she studied.
    We live in the Belfast suburbs and our future doesn´t positive but ...

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  12. did I say 'our' future???!!! Oh no, no way!! Stop Max and think, what you want is getting your keys and that's all, go to her house, get into yours, get the keys and thank her for the help. Yes, that's what I'm going to do! Jessica's eyes had trapped me buy I'm not going to surrend to her soft and delicious voice,... Max, you are thinking about her again! Stop! 'Jessica, let's go to your house and I try to reach my bedroom's window from yours''Yes, Max alright, let's go' she said with a smile.

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  13. ... but I warning you,my grandmother is very unbearable,so have a little patience,please.

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  14. But I didn't need her advice. I knew it very well, she was the cause of my bad luck because of her gossips and complaints. It was mutual, I didn't like her and she didn't like me.
    Anyway, my phyton was hungry, I should defrost one of the mouses I keep into the freezer to feed her or she may start to look for food on her own so I had no choice and I went to Jessica's home.

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  16. jessica´s grandmother was in the dining room, then she saw me and she shouted me: yuo can´t come in here, you konw it. your phyton...

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  17. YOUR PHYTON GLOBBED MINE HUSBAND, AND YOU DIDN´T MAKE NOTHING. I AM ALCOHOLIC FOR YOUR FAULT. YOU WON´T NEVER SEE THE LIGH OF DAY. THEN THE JESSICA´S GRANDMOTHER TOOK THE POWER SAW AND SHE CUT UP THE MAN. THE MOST LATER, SHE AND JESSICA OPENNED THE MAX´S DOOR AND THEY GAVE THE MAX´S BODY TO THE PHYTON FOR TO EAT.

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